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I am Shattered
Into two beings
Not dynamic

The man who waits
And acts
And exudes confidence
And         confusion

The being who understands
And knows
               Observes
And sees the Future,
                    Past,
             and Present
As = =

The rational and the man
The scientist and the subject

One sees the fork
And sees each path<Strike>’s end</Strike>
But the other must choose

Must forget the knowledge
The other gives
To be, gods must learn

Learn to be men again
Forget their omniscience
And walk in imperfect shoes

We are all blind,
We are all deaf,
Blinded by our schemas,
Deafened by inner voices
©2005-2009 ~unluckysillyboy
:iconunluckysillyboy:

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Free handed unedited. So its not perfect but Im waiting to decide on what to change. Critique and Comment welcomed. Hope the ideas are transfered.

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"Learn to be men again
Forget their omniscience
And walk in imperfect shoes"

i love that. the poem is great; i'm not sure what i would change about it.... if i think of something, i'll pass it on.

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hmCm

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